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A Day of New York, a Continuation of my Turmoil.

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As time came to pass,
Decisions requiring precision knocking at my door,
I shoulda known to watch my ass!
When will it become my time for my body to hit the floor?

What'd I do to deserve this series of events,
of family member's suicide,
Now here I am to vent,
I could do nothing the day my love had died.

Move into an apartment with an ass,
Being a disappointment to my dad,
Always eating food that taste like crass,
To end up with a life that can only be described as bad.

Drinking away my troubles till I faint,
My sense or morality has decayed,
Seems the only thing I do is taint,
I guess this how I'm repaid!

My car went far outside my reach,
Been beaten bloody at the bar,
My family viewing me as a hungry leech,
Still dealing with physical and mental scars!

My life literally takes stabs at me!
Been extorted for ever cent I once had
My house's roof gets taken down via tree!
Worked out of debt from ground up is anything but rad.

Who'd think life would turn out to be my Judas?
Where'd it begin, a life of sorrow,
Begin everyday clueless!
Never having an assured normal day tomorrow!

Depressed but never suicidal,
Waiting eagerly for joy's revival!
Turmoil's turned tidal.
Till then I'm in a New York City Survival!
This is describing my life since I reached the age if twenty. Seven years of experience. All in these stanzas. It shows how much I've done with my life really.

Critique Requested.
© 2017 - 2024 L-Tine
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ALEXIYXVII's avatar
First off sorry about getting fired from your job, I read this and your journal at three times already and I still can't believe it, I was thinking to myself who the fuck fires a worker without notice? Also I really like your poetry, when I read your poetry it was quite saddening to me but knowing you L-Tine I think you'll pull through! Huggle!